I was go to the fiml on yesterday.I'm waited for the bus.It takes me about 10 minutes.The bus was comed.I'm get on the bus.I saw a old woman get on the bus.I give a seat for her.the old woman said"Thank you""That's all right"I said.About 12 minutes,I'm get off the bus.I wave goodbye to the woman.I'm glad to give the old a seat.I was into the fiml.
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i went to the film yesterday.it took me 10 minutes to waitfor the bus. after i got on the bus, i saw an old woman aboard the bus.i offerd my seat to her. she smiled and said "Thank you"to me. i answerd "that's all right." about 12 minutes later, i got off. i waved my hands and said "goodbye" to the old lady. i wasso glad tha...
楼主好~首先客观评价的话..这篇短文几乎每一句都有问题..而且语法紊乱..时态混杂..还兼有一些单词错误..但是从看来..条理明晰..也完全可以看出您此文要表达的意思..帮您简单修改如下：I was going to see a film yesterday.it took me about 10 minutes to wait for the...
