hello everyone. first let me introduce myself. my name is *****26
i come from ****** i will olngalittle english
my interest is the movie and tourism
i like the movie the twilght series
its nice tobe here
i hope we get along very well
thank you
整篇文章还是很不错的，只是有个别地方写得不太清楚。如：1. I will olng a little english.是不是想说：I can speak a little English.或是Ihave learnt a little English?2. my interest is the movie and tourism. 最好说成 I am interested in watching movies and I like travelling very much....
