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I had an exciting experience today. our school orgnize an autumn trip for us. we went to someplace to skiing.I haven't skiing before this time, so I'm a fresh. I hold the snow board to go uphill, my hand heart, because the board is very havely, is't about 10KG.I'm the fist man arrival at the uphill. when I ready to skiing down.I'm so fucking happy.I never had that feeling when I'was standing top of the hill and watching all the people below to me.I think I'm the one!haha then I'm off...and I was fall down,luckly,I'm ok,the snow is soft. after several times I can control myself. the speed that you had naver been.fucking cool! everybody behind me.I guess skiing is much more exciting than skating . if you had not skiing,you should try.such a happy day I had!
上面这段话的翻译,还有我觉得这段话语法上有点问题,请指出,谢谢

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千问 | 2008-11-10 21:16:43 | 显示全部楼层
不止是语法错误,还造了词啊,晕...
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