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Dear Editor,
1. I have read your advertisement on yesterday's China
2.Daily. I'm sure that I'm fit for a position in your company.
3.I am a girl of twenty-two year old. I'm in good health. After
4.graduated from middle school, I learnt English in an evening
5.school for two years. I sthdied bookkeeping, typewriting and
6.writing. I did good in these subjects. Not only can I operate the
7.computer and I'm good at English in listening and speaking. I'm
8.interested in the position as a secretary. I wanted to get the job and
9.work for your company very much. I am sure that I do it well if
10.you give to me the chance to be a member of your company.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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千问 | 2008-11-21 20:16:37 | 显示全部楼层
1. I have read your advertisement on(in) yesterday's China 2.Daily. I'm sure that I'm fit(competent) for a(the) position in your company. 3.I am a girl of twenty-two year(years) old. I'm in good health. After 4.graduated from middle school, I (had)learnt English in an evening 5.school for two years. I sthdied(studied) bo...
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