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Now I am a university student.I'm feeling void during the past 10 weeks this term.I take more than 10 hours on bed every day,while I spent a little time in studying my major,so my major is so-so .I will graduate from university in 2010.I feeling
fear .I am worried abuot I can't find a good job after I graduate
My home located in a remote village.My parents are famers.They hope me I can find a good job after I graduate from university.I feels sad when my parent apears my mind.I decided to study hard in school from today on.I have stronge will.I believe I can.

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千问 | 2008-11-25 21:12:22 | 显示全部楼层
先给分,我可以给你批改。分不值钱,但那是作为尊重他人劳动的象征。...
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