a survy issued by the department of sociology at bejijing uiversity suggeststhat 54%collegestudents sufferfrom burden 不管什么负担了。。and it is a4 %more than it was in 2007
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您好，改动如下：A 2008 survey conducted by the Department of Sociology at Peking Uiversity suggests/indicates/shows... that 54% college students are suffering from burden (不管什么负担了), which is 4% higher/more than that in 2007.改动说明：（由于没有中文，就着英文改动也许会偏离您原来的意思，在此请您谅解）问题应该是学术类的吧，那么用词和句式就是偏向正式的。首先，如果是2008年的调查，我建议在句首survey前加上2008，使...
a survy issued by the department of Sociology at Bejing Uiversity suggests that 54% college students (sufferred) from burden 不管什么负担了。。 and it is (a 去掉) 4 % more than (that of) 2007...
