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这有一篇我自己写的英语作文,不知道语法用得对不对,语句不知道通不通顺,请一些英语较好的帮忙看一下对或错,如果有错的请指出来,谢谢
Dengyapingwasborn onthe2ndofJune1978shestartedtoplaytabletennis.afterfiveyearsshejoinedtheHennantabletennisItwasahardthingbutsheWashard.Soafterfiveyearsshejoinedthenationaltabletennisteamplayedforhernationalteam. shelikedstudy verymuchwhenshewas24yearsshewanttoTsinghuaUniversitymajorinEnlishandmanagementshealsolikedtabletennis.shefrom1993to1998shebecamethenumberonewomen’ssinglesplayerintheITTF

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千问 | 2008-12-11 20:51:55 | 显示全部楼层
It was a hard thing but she Was hard你的意思应该是她努力练习吧 如果是的话 应该用 she worked very hardafter five years she joined the national table tennis team played for her national team.这里的play应该用非谓语的形式,而且是主动用法,所以该用playingshe want to Tsinghua University major in Enlish and management 应该是她去清华吧 want 变went major这里是动词,该用非谓语形式 majoring...
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千问 | 2008-12-11 20:51:55 | 显示全部楼层
Born on 2nd June, 1978, Deng Yaping started her career in the sport of table tennis when she was very young. Five years later she entered the Henan Table Tennis Team-it was very di...
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