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Three little rabbit picked a mushroom.
Two bigger rabbit made the smaller rabbit pick some potherb.
The smaller rabbit said "I don't go,you will eat my mushroom".
Two bigger rabbit said "Take easy,we won't".
So the smaller rabbit went to pick potherb.
Half a year passed,the smaller rabbit haven't came back.
The one said "He won't come back,we eat it".
The other one said"Wait again".
One year passed,the smaller rabbit haven't came back yet.
Two bigger rabbit talked we did't wait and started to eat it.
At this time the smaller rabbit suddenly jumped from the jungle and angrily said "I knew you would eat my mushroom".

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千问 | 2008-12-13 16:30:31 | 显示全部楼层
Three little rabbits picked a mushroom. Two bigger rabbits made the smallest rabbit pick some potherbs. The smallest rabbit said "I don't want to go, because you will eat my mushrooms". Two bigger rabbits said "Take it easy,we won'tdo that". So the smallest rabbit wentpicking potherbs. Half a year passed,the smallest...
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千问 | 2008-12-13 16:30:31 | 显示全部楼层
Three little rabbits picked a mushroom.The two bigger rabbits made the smaller rabbit pick some pot herbs.The smaller rabbit said "I won't go, because you will eat my mushroom....
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千问 | 2008-12-13 16:30:31 | 显示全部楼层
复数请用rabbitstalked后要引号...
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