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Mary is my friend. A young sports stars! I feel very lucky. Our friendship is sincere。In my memory, as a child he liked to swim, 8-year-old near the diving team. She will treasure this opportunity and serious training. When 13-year-old with outstanding achievements into the national team. A year after the Asian Games champion, the 10th World Swimming Championships. This year was the 29th Olympic Games gold medal. I presented her a bouquet of flowers. We are particularly happy

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千问 | 2008-12-18 21:12:54 | 显示全部楼层
玛丽是我的朋友。一位年轻的体育明星!我觉得非常幸运。因为我们的友谊是真诚的。在我的记忆中,他非常喜欢游泳,她8岁进入的跳水队。她很珍惜这个机会和严格的培训。在13岁以优异的成绩进入国家队。是一年后的亚运会冠军,第十届世界游泳锦标赛。今年是第29届奥运会金牌。我很高兴的送了她一束鲜花。我们高兴、。Mary is the friend of mine. A young sports star! I thought that is lucky. Because our friendship is sincere. In mine memory, he likes swimming, her 8 year-old enter diving te...
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千问 | 2008-12-18 21:12:54 | 显示全部楼层
Mary is my friend. A young sports star! I feel very lucky. Our friendship is sincere。In my memory, as a child he likedswimming, at the age of 8 she was admitted to the diving tea...
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千问 | 2008-12-18 21:12:54 | 显示全部楼层
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