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Hello, I am Liu Wei. Now let me tell you something about my day.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. So I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning. I have breakfast at 6:45. Then I go to school at 7:00. Oh! It is 8:00. It is time to do morning exercises. “Class begins.” “Good morning, Mr. Guo!” Do you know what`s the time now, friends? Yes, It is 8:20!The first class begins. I often have lunch at 11:00. I go home at 5:40 in the afternoon. I usually have dinner at 6:00 in the evening. I do my homework at 7:00 in the evening. It is time to go to bed at 11:00.
This is my day. It is a funny day. How about yours, friends?

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千问 | 2008-12-28 14:44:41 | 显示全部楼层
Hello, I am Liu Wei. Now let me tell you something about my daily life. I go to school from Monday to Friday. So I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning. my breakfast at 6:45. and Then I go to school at 7:00. Oh! It is 8:00. It is time to do morning exercises. “oh!the time for go to school.” “Good morning, Mr. Guo!” Do you k...
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千问 | 2008-12-28 14:44:41 | 显示全部楼层
It is time to go to bed at 11:00. 改成The time to go to bed is at 11:00It is a funny day。funny改成fun...
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千问 | 2008-12-28 14:44:41 | 显示全部楼层
内容不好,感觉像流水账~~而且 It's not funny!...
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