帮忙看下英语短文有没有语法错误,顺便添加一些内容 谢谢!

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What is the magic? In short, a magician to use their imagination and technology to achieve a magic effect can be called magic. We usually like to watch magic shows because we think that magic is interesting. For example, magician takes a rabbit from his empty hat, and magician can let a woman float in the air. These magic looks very magical, but in fact, they are not magic. They are the magician made a hoax to us. When we see the truth of magic, magic is very simple, and we can do them too. Now let us look at the truth of some magic.
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2L的其它的我懂了,不过第一句那个who是干嘛的...麻烦解释一下 3Q

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千问 | 2009-1-3 14:18:49 | 显示全部楼层
What is the magic? In short, a magician _who_ use their imagination and technology to achieve a magic effect can be called magic. We usually like to watch magic shows because we think that magic is interesting. For example, a magician takes _out_ a rabbit from his empty hat, and magician can _make_ a woman float in the air. Thes...
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Magic What is magic? In short, a magicianusing their imagination and technology to achieve a magic effect can be called magic. We usually likewatching magic shows because we ...
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What is magic? In short, magic is the combination of magicians' imagination and technology. Most people like watching magic shows because magic is interesting,for example, taking a...
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千问 | 2009-1-3 14:18:49 | 显示全部楼层
写的蛮好的...
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