急!!!大家帮我找找英文会计简历中的错误

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Majors:
basic accounting, financial management, financial accounting, cost accounting, financial English, management accounting, economic law, tax law, auditing and so on.
The level of skills:
Master the accounting, auditing, basic theory and basic knowledge, skilled application of accounting methods and techniques, to address accounting practices, financial management capacity of the basic problems with management, economic, and accounting, and so on the knowledge and ability.
Education Background:
2005.9-2009.7Beijing City University
2002.9-2005.7Beijing No.65 Middle School
Awards: Awards In College
freshman: study scholarships,学习优良生?
sophomore year: 全勤生?
third:
Practice
1.While studying at the school organized classmates to rehearse english stage play The Sound of Music.The organization has a good ability to communicate collaboration.
2.2007/6-2007/8 Italian restaurant to do the work and train a good sense of discipline and team spirit
3.2008/6-2008/9 IDG High Technology Company accounting practice, in theory,based on accumulated practical experience for future work has laid a good foundation for professional job.
Personal skills:
English CET-4
With their qualification certificates,cash familiar with the bank's day-to-day operations management, reimbursement for the cost of the audit, and other documents, entry.
Proficiency in Excel / office, and other office Automation software
Personality characteristics: I prudent character, a sincere enthusiasm for others, be happy with people, the unity of students, down-to-earth hard to learn. Responsible for serious work, there is a strong organizational capacity, the actual hands-on group and team spirit, be able to quickly adapt to the environment and into one. While studying at the school to learn in courses on the basis of participation in social practice, the accumulation of social experience and strive to overcome the lack of experience in the school's disadvantage. The company hopes to get approval to have the opportunity to cooperate with the company.
非常感谢tjinbj对于你说得问题我做出了改正 我没有外国的朋友 能不能麻烦你再帮我看看我改过的
PERSONAL
Name: Jie Zhang
Sex: Female
Birthdate:July 28,1987
Height: 165CM
Health Condition:excellent
Education: Undergraduate
Professional: Accounting
E-mail: [email protected]

Mobile:******
09/2005-07/2009 Bachelor of Certified Public Accountant

Beijing City University
09/2002-07/2005Beijing No.65 Middle School
Curriculum:
basic accounting, financial management, financial accounting, cost accounting, financial English, management accounting, economic law, tax law, auditing
Awards: Awards In College
freshman: academic year study scholarships,
sophomore year: academic year non-leave pay
third: academic year non-leave pay
Practice experience:
Personal skills:
Personality characteristics:

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千问 | 2009-1-10 15:12:50 | 显示全部楼层
Major是专业,你有那么多的专业吗?一般就一个学位或者两个学位。不是专业课的意思。 然后你要不然就不列,也不能写so on the level of skill 里面 比如说 Auditing very good 或者well experienced. 我建议你拿这个简历给你的外国朋友看一下。如果是外国人面试你的话,还挺糟糕的。因为我以前做人力资源,我负责的是招聘外国人。这样的建立我看了就删了。因为不是很专业。应该有很多模版的。chinahr就有英文的模版,那个还是很专业的。应该写那个。考勤在美国大学叫做attendence 全勤是full attendence.然后列时间应该是从最近到最远。也就是倒叙的方...
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