这是我写给帮我申请暑期实习的一个远亲的邮件，我们之间不是太熟，对方比我大，已工作，是外资企业的白领。我主要想催问一下实习的事怎么说，成了没，还有表达一下即使不成也没关系。希望各位英语达人能帮我检查一下英语表达和内容是否得体，不要表现的我太幼稚。希望大家认真看看，满意的话会追加分
Hi XXX
It's July and I'm in my summer vacation in NJ now. How are you?
My vacation lasts about 2 months till 27th, August and besides getting an intership, I also would like to take some Germany classes which could last for a month. Therefore I would appreciate it if you can tell me how is the case going and the general time of the intership so I can arrange my time.
However, if my application is rejected or there doesn't seem to be a chance this time, It'll be OK, as the most important thing to me is learning more wherever I am. I will try to find myself a part-time job in NJ.
By the way, take care of yourself during the hot summer.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Have a nice day.
XXX
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