At the beginning,I plan to sing a song.but I never sing English songs.And I don't know which one is suitable for me.So I decide to make a speech at last.Today I want to tell you a story.
Now,let's start.
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I plan to sing a song.因为你说了是At the begining ,所以应该改成过去式。Iplanned to sing a song.but I never sing English songs.好像要改成But i have never sung English before.So I decide to make a speech 同样的，这句话也是发生在过去，所以也应该是过去式。So I decided to make a speech.at last，可以省略咯~~...
In the beginning. at the beginning后要加of,句中用这个也不太适合.speech是演讲,后面又说story,好像不太符.另外,文中都应用过去时.以下是我改的:At first, I planed to sing a song, but I have never sang in English. And I als...
