以下是雅思的一道小作文题目，线形图讲的关于某汉堡包在1998年全年各个月份的销量情况。下面是我写的文章，请高手改错并给出意见，谢谢！
The line graph illustrates the sales of HARRYS humburgers form January to December in the year 1998 .
As we can see from the line graph , the number of sales fluctuated over the 12 months . More specifically , at first in January the sales was only 1900 and experienced a slight growth with the number of sales reached nearly 2000 in February . The period from February to June sees a marginal dropped ,but finally the sales rose again from 1700 in May to 1800 in June .
Then , the sales shot up over the next two months and peaked at 2900 in August . After that , the sales soon declined rapidly for two months , bottomed out at just upon 1000 in October . From this point onwards , the sales experienced a sharp rose again and arrived at 1500 before the Christmas Day in the year 1998 .
Overall , it can be seen obviously that , in year 1998 , August was the best month for HARRYS humburgers sale and October was the worst .
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