急!谁帮我修改一下这篇关于人们庆祝春节的文章?英语口语!

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用于口语~
帮修改一下错误,和设计一下上下文连接词.
Today, I will talk about how to celebrate the Spring Festival.
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. People will be busy to prepare a lot for the Spring Festival before it comes. For example, people will buy some new clothes; buy many candies, cookies and fruits, which are prepared for the Spring Festival. What’s more, people will also clean up their house and paste couplets.
When Spring Festival comes, the children will play fireworks at night. And they will also get the red packets from adults, which are including the best wishes to children about the Spring Festival. Besides, people will visit relatives and friends, and have a dinner together.
In many public places, people will organize celebration activities to celebrate the Spring Festival.
Everyone wants to have a good beginning in the Spring Festival.

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千问 | 2008-12-24 10:58:07 | 显示全部楼层
people are busy preparing lots of stuff for Spring festival... 建议,用for instance不要for example people buy some new clothes, candies,cookies and fruits. 后面不要,重复了. clean up their house不要用将来时,楼主用太多了,介绍时没有必要. 后面的自己改吧,一般现在时就可以了they also recieve red packets, people organize celebration activeitest to cheer for the spring festi...
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