求英语自我简介

[复制链接]
查看11 | 回复2 | 2008-12-26 23:59:37 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
请将这篇简介用高级的表达方式改写一遍,要求句子通顺,有文采,遵循原文大意,可适当删减添加,字数不宜过多。谢谢。原文如下:
My name isXXX,presently attending XXX school.
I love languages and cultures.I like talking with different people from different countries so that I can learn a lot from them and enrich my experience.
I have a lot of hobbies, like listening to the music,drawing.singing and swimming .In this way,I've improved myself a lot.
My favourite motto is," DO what you can with what you have ,where
you are.'' As this motto goes, I'll follow my dream and pull out the stops.
请英语高手赐教!!这是要用来参加英语口语比赛的,所以写得要足够给评委留下好印象
我还是需要一个比较正式的自我介绍,句子还是需要更高级一些~~太口语了也不好啊 不过 还要通顺~~ 可以再加上“我想将中国文化介绍给世界”这一类的话~~ 谢谢了!!!

回复

使用道具 举报

千问 | 2008-12-26 23:59:37 | 显示全部楼层
比较正式吧,稍长了一点。楼主自己再顺顺吧Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is。。. presently attending XXX school。I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.I have broad interests to fill my spare time like many other youngers.I love reading books, especially those ...
回复

使用道具 举报

千问 | 2008-12-26 23:59:37 | 显示全部楼层
我做了一些修改,基于的原则是:简洁,流畅,口语化,没有明显的语法错误.希望对你能有所帮助.I am XXX, a student from XXX school. I love to study languages and cultures.I am interested in talking with different people fr...
回复

使用道具 举报

您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

本版积分规则

主题

0

回帖

4882万

积分

论坛元老

Rank: 8Rank: 8

积分
48824836
热门排行