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根据以下思路写一篇150左右作文作文重在遣词造句,字数一定达到150字,直接在提示上加主语这种作文别来 100分不少了啊
1Two young boys wanted to smoke---took two cigaretts from father's packet---went and hid in the garage.
2They lit the cigarettes---smoke and coughing---father saw smoke coming from garage---rushed down---smiled when he saw boys---offered them cigars---the boys accepted them---both very sick

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千问 | 2009-7-27 11:13:20 | 显示全部楼层
Smoking is regarded as a symbol of grown man in the eye of boys.Therefore,it makes sense why the brothers-Tom and Jerry-wanted to try some smoking.Their father was a chainsmoker who always had at least one packet of cigarettes in his jacket pocket.One day,the boys decided to take on actions.They made a plan with division of labo...
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千问 | 2009-7-27 11:13:20 | 显示全部楼层
我也不知道额~!还没学到呢。我把别人写的发给你吧~Key to Summary writing After an ancient bus had stopped by a dry river bed, a party of famous film stars descended. They were dressed in dark glasses a...
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