高一短文改错求助

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Dear Grandpa

Thank you for your letter.

My school is organizing a basketball team and

there's just a chance which I can join it.I'm little of
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course,but terribly quick and bravely.While the others
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are jumping about in the air,I can run under my legs
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and get the ball.It will be lot of fun for practicing out79.
in the playground in the afternoon with the tree
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around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing
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and shouting.These are the happier girls I've ever
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seen and I'm the happiest in all!
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I meant to write long letter and tell you all the
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things I'm doing at school,but the bell was ringing,
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so I just have to stop here

千问 · 2009-7-31 06:49:47

76.答案:which→that先行词有the only,the very,just修饰时,只用that。77.答案:bravely→braveterribly是副词,修饰形容词,所以bravely应该改成brave,和quick 一样用形容词。78.答案:my→their人不能在自己腿下跑,所以是在别人跳起时在别人腿下抢到球。79.答案:去掉fun后的forIt’s fun doing sth.表示“做某事很有趣”。80.答案:tree→trees根据后面的“around us”可知不是特指具体某棵树,所以需要用the trees,不能用the tree。81.答案:√82.答案:h...

千问 · 2009-7-31 06:49:47

本人才疏，最差英文，但是找到个错 I've never seem 吧还有the+happier？不是最高级吗？还有读起来还像很多and 试着换下其他连词，多用用新学的短语，文章有点直译的感觉，可能换下句式比较好，例如 it's the best thing that I've never seem....

千问 · 2009-7-31 06:49:47

76which->that77bravely->brave78my->their79lot->lots80tree->trees81正确82happier->happiest83in->of84long前加a85was->is...