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Nowadays,the phenomenon of adolescents committing crimes has become a social problem authentically,causing extensive attentions and controversies. However,the topical subject is that parents should be responsible when teenage commit crimes,has become a focal point of discussion. This essay will discuss both arguments regarding this issue.
The reason why parent should not be responsible for crimes committed by teenage reflect 2 aspects. First of all,one of the most significant factors for children to grow up is independence. Parents only intervene in a few cases. Therefore,parents have unnecessary relation to adolescents’ behavior. A third point is that children from good families can sometimes commit crimes. As far as above-mentioned reasons,parents should not be responsible.
However,I hold the view that parents should be responsible for crimes committed by children. Firstly,it’s a phenomenon of mistake of education. Parents should make their efforts to correct adolescents’ mistake. Another point is that some parents have their own defects of education. How can they teach next generation? What to say in the end is that some parents misguide offspring with lack of law knowledge. Moreover they consider that money can solve everything and compensate fault if their children commit crimes.

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千问 | 2011-8-1 11:53:27 | 显示全部楼层
你写的很有水准啊!只是有个别打错的或直接查看翻译软件而造成的生硬感及小失误,在此指出,以作交流和学习:Nowadays,the phenomenon of adolescents committing crimes has become a social problem authentically,causing extensive attentions and controversies. 【However——As a consequence】,the topical subject 【is that——whether后面的has become是谓语】 parents should be responsible when 【teenage——te...
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千问 | 2011-8-1 11:53:27 | 显示全部楼层
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千问 | 2011-8-1 11:53:27 | 显示全部楼层
*新奇*有写作批改卡,可以的话让专业老师批改要好些...
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