帮忙改一下英语作文~

显示全部楼层 · 2009-1-23 18:30:08

I think the main reason that is the human-caused pollution or other activity which is leading to global warming.
As a student who will go to the college soon,firstly,we should save the energy,fo example,turn off the unused electrical appliances.Secondly,we can also use the things that are used from the recycled meterial.Thirdly,we should take care of the trees and animals.The last ,when you see somebody wasting the energy or doing harm for the nuture,you should point in out and keep him from doing it.
帮忙改下错误，顺便打个分数~满分30，按高考水平打分就可以~谢谢！！

千问 · 2009-1-23 18:30:08

1.楼主第一句话有问题，不清楚你具体想表达什么意思，我给你改改你参考一下：I think the main reason which causes global warming is the man-made pollution or other activties of human beings.2.“利用循环资源”直接翻译就好：use recycling energy.3.The last应改为Finally更合适。4.应该是do harm to而不是for.5.point it out楼主笔误吧。6.keep from用在这里不合适，用stop from更合适些，因为你是主观阻止意愿比较强。以我的经验24分左右应该可以了。...

千问 · 2009-1-23 18:30:08

I think the main reason that lead to global warming is man-made pollution and human being's activities.As a student who will enter the university, I should do something to prot...