求改错,估计有许多语法错误。

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I like painting. This is what I want to be the primary cause of the artist. Also because the artist is free, their thoughts on paper can be unconstrained in the picture show. Whether it is classical, impressionist, expressionist, abstract. My favorite brush with the brush on the paper layer after layer of paint on the feeling. I am happy that, tireless. These sounds are very good, but easy to become an artist. Without a certain drawing skills, art appreciation is not enough, beautiful enough for sensitive, will hold people to become artists. Real artist to do much more than that. Must adhere to walk the road of determination to maintain their purity of thought, to set aside the shackles of money. I like Van Gogh,I like Van Gogh, his life and his art has given me inspiration, I also like Monet, he painted in the mood I want to achieve. These two great artists created the artistic value is unmatched, which makes me strive for the goal.

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千问 | 2011-8-13 09:31:05 | 显示全部楼层
I like painting. This is the main reason why I want to be an artist. Besides, the artists are free, andtheir thoughts drawin the paper can be unconstrained in the painting exhibition. Whether it be classical, impressional, expressional, or abstract, I like the feeling that paints my favorite picture with the brush on the pap...
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千问 | 2011-8-13 09:31:05 | 显示全部楼层
看得眼花,不过第一句没句,表兴趣,并且两个动词在一起,后面的动词用ing形式...
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千问 | 2011-8-13 09:31:05 | 显示全部楼层
你写的吧太难改了...
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千问 | 2011-8-13 09:31:05 | 显示全部楼层
第一句就错了,paint后面不应该加ing, ing表示正在进行的动作...
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