谁能帮我修改这两句话

显示全部楼层 · 2009-2-10 15:46:32

1.first,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom ifwe watch korean movies.

2.disadvantages is that it is bad for our eye-sightspend much time in watchingkorean movies.To make matters worse,watching korean moving have a bad effect on our brain .
3.disadvantages is that spend more time not only bad for our eye-sight but also brain
大意为;第一看韩剧我们可以或得好心情,和学到一些有关韩国的文化知识和风俗.2.3句意是；不好的方面是,花太多时间去看韩剧会眼,脑不好

千问 · 2009-2-10 15:46:32

1:first,we can have joys to watch korean movies. and we can learn about some korean culture from the movies.2,3. The bad way is, it's very harmful toeyes and brain because of watching too much korean movies....

千问 · 2009-2-10 15:46:32

besides 的用法错了你这里要用的是 moreover, furthermore 之类的如果要用besides,就不用逗号besides the fact that we could learn ....disadvantages is ? are 才对bad for our eye-sight spend(ing) (too) ...

千问 · 2009-2-10 15:46:32

1.Firstly,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies. 2.The disadvantage is that it is bad for our ey...