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Until I let my memories became a castle.
It had a rusty gate.
The memories in it,
majority of all is disgusting,
majority of all is unhappy,
majority of all is unable to withstand,
majority of all I do my best to forget, actually helpless.

b.
You always very honest,
so you usually injured to me ,direct

c.
Why,I continuously think you are a fraud?
Maybe ,not.

d.
Finally,
please remember,
don't touch my memorise .
what a unlovely way to say you want to understand me .

e.
In fact
you konw nothing about me .
you kown nothing.
maybe you just can give me some warm and a lots of wounds.
修改得稍微像美文一样的更好。万谢。

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千问 | 2009-2-12 09:43:45 | 显示全部楼层
sorry,it is too long.no time to read...
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