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显示全部楼层 · 2011-2-26 12:26:05

I Want to Be a doctor
I want to be a doctor in twenty years.Because I like help another people.And my favorite color is white.So how am I going to do that?
First,I'll study harder and go to the best high school.Then I'll go to Qinghua or Beida college.Next,I'll go to Japan to learn how to be a doctor.Finally ,I'll get back China and be a best doctor.
请英语高手帮忙改一下。

千问 · 2011-2-26 12:26:05

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千问 · 2011-2-26 12:26:05

I have a dream，I Want to Be a doctor in the future. I will be a doctor in twenty years.Because I want to helping another people .And my favorite color is white，it means the life ...

千问 · 2011-2-26 12:26:05

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