高中的英语口语比赛 去、麻烦帮我修改一下 本人最严重的问题 就是中式英语（哪里错修改哪里就行了）顺便再给文章的结构提提意见吧 （会不会有的地方转折很突然）拼写错误也最好挑出来，我的WORD不检测拼写错误。
当然 也可以把改的文章发到我的邮箱中（用不同颜色标出来改动的地方）我会再追加悬赏。[email protected]
Today,my topic is about harmonious society.I agree that everyone has responsibility to bulid our harmonious.Now,I’d like to talk about the limit of cars on the roads.
In order to hold the olymic games sucessfuly,we did lots of things.But didn’t everything to hold the Olymic Games only.At present,we have lots of problems which need to work out.one of the most populai things is about the limit of cars on the roads.
limiting cars on the roads,most of the public support this policy.totally,I realized the reason of this policy,so I support it.this policy can make the environment much better,it’s everyone’s duty to protect the envirnoment.what’more,there will be less traffic jams.i also think that mang people can enjoy driving on the roads.
however,although this policy brings a number of advantages,part of the public is against limiting cars.Some people think,it’s resonable for them to drive in the streets.it’s necessary for them to go to work by car.i understand them.because my home is far away from school.some days,my family obey the policy,I must go to school by bus.
In my opinion,the goverrment wants to give eneryone a satisftiy reply.like compensate the follower.now,more and more roads and railway lines are under construction.i can go out conviently.
Whatever,the society is a large famliy,we should protect others’rights,too.everynody,wants to breath fresh air.if we make effort together,the society will be much better.let’s be a member of the harmonious society.
12日下午我就要定稿了 能帮一点是一点吧！
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