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Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he wroks very hard.No matter how difficult, he doesn't have to give up.So at the end of his seccess.He received the coveted championship ring.But now he suffered injuries.（这句话我想表达的意思是：但是现在，他却饱受伤病的困扰）He no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still support him just like in the past.Because I not only appreciate his game.I appreciate his attitude on everything,serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the attitude of my life.Of course,he is very handsome.But it's only a small part of all the reasonsfor i love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.
You did a venderful job, just with some little grammar problem. So let me try do some thing for you if you don't mind...Kevin Garnett is my favourite basketball player.He is very handsome and sexy. He's from the US and plaied basketballfor Celtics,Boston I love him very much because he worked very hard. No matter how d...
Kevin Garnett IS my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He IS （作文不应该用's) from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.I love him very much because he WORKS ve...
试试看！你的文章句子很简单而且结构很单一，可以用一些复杂点的句子让文章更美。 Kevin Garnett is my favourite person who is handsome and sexy.He is a basketball player of Boston Celtics, USA. I am totally fond of him ...
