原文改之后Hello , I come form Liaocheng of Shandong Province. And now I study in U.S.A. I know this programm is very popular.But now I don't listen to it.I want to say I love it very much. Happy new year!
Lei你好,我来自山东潦城,现在在美国学习。我知道这个节目很受欢迎,但是现在我不收听这个节目了,我想说我很喜欢这个节目。祝你新年快乐!
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改了的话还是错的。呵呵,真有意思。我也来改改。Hello,I come from Liao Cheng located in Shan Dong Province, and now I am studying in USA. I know this program is very popular, but now, I don't listen to it. I want to say I love it very much. Happy New Year!你好:我来自山东聊城,现在在美国学习。我知道这个节目很受欢迎,但是我没有收听这个节目。我想说我喜欢它。祝新年快乐。雷。这个是在原作基础上的修改,但是话不是这样说的。那个在美国的英文水平不高。过个四级勉强。