请各位高手帮我批改一下初中英语作文

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My Dear Father:How are You?Father's Day is coming soon. I miss you so much at this time of the year. I understand that you have to be away from our home due to your work in order to let me have a better living. But, you are always in my heart. Thank you for giving me a perfect life. I am very proud of you. You have shown...
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千问 | 2009-6-16 13:23:25 | 显示全部楼层
1.第3句错了,是these days 不是this days2.Thank you for giving me so prefect life.改成such a perfect life3.Please take good of yourself错了,take good care of4.I will always love u...
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千问 | 2009-6-16 13:23:25 | 显示全部楼层
Father's————Fathers’ this--theseat this time of the year。。。没搞懂你想说啥。。。。我猜是recently。。。 and for me a better life------that led me to live a better life。。。。。(说实话。。这句。。。)...
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千问 | 2009-6-16 13:23:25 | 显示全部楼层
还可以I will always love u.will 去掉会比较好...
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