英语作文------------------------ 什么地方不好,帮我改一下!!!!!!

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修订:LastSaturdaymorning , MrChenlefthomeearly togofishing.But he didn't get any fish at all.Atthat moment , he knew that Mrs. Chen would be angry with him if he took nothing to home .Sohewenttotheshop , andboughtsomefish . Afterthat , hewenthome inhappy mood.备注:本文发生的时间在过去,那么在讲...
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