一句一句改：1.It is said that a large shopping center will be built in our community.to是多余的，还有你要表达大型购物中心，只要用large就可以了，不需要用比较级。最后，这句话最好用被动语态好些，因为用there作主语 感觉很中式的英语。2.The shopping center can serve all the things to us,which not only to our neighbor,but also to others.can情态动词后面用动词原形，not only前面加个which才能连接前面的句子，不然就是另外一个独立橘子，而不是跟前面句子组成的...
it is said that there will build a larger shopping center in our community. the shopping center can serves all the things to us ,not only to our neighbor,but alse others. every...
