"Yearstoday"单词错误“yesterday"，第一句也可以像上面说的，该一下比较好，变为“It's very hot yestoday”，reach后缺少介词,可加to，“i could stand it"是我能忍受的意思，"could"改为"couldn't","though"是通过的意思，应该是“thought"认为，“swimming could us stay healthy”应改为“swimming could make us keep healthy"(情态动词could后要跟动词，不能直接跟名词“swimming")，“loved"改为"love"表示一般行为，不用过去式，“played water"都改为"...
SwimmingYearstoday was very hot .The temperature reached 39.7℃. I could stand it,so I went to a swimming pool with my friends---Ted,Mike and Jake.We all thought swimming could ma...
第一句应该是It's very hot yestoday.你几乎是中文式英语啊！“so I went to a swimming pool with my friends---Ted,Mike and Jake.”很夸张啊！应该是so I went to swimming with my friends,there're Ted,Mike and Jac...
