So the most significant thing in university is to develop the students’ confidence and capability, which can help them to adapt the society much easier这条观点是为了证明什么？是证明the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs还是 university education has wider benefits for individuals and society我觉得这一观点貌似是...
题目问的是讨论两种观点，给出自己观点。但你的作文只在第一段略微提及了一下两个观点，后面所有的部分都在讨论自己的观点，虽然也有具体的实例佐证，但是没有紧扣题目。从语言表达上看：中式表达很多，不是英语写作的习惯思维。比如：high school graduates have laid a good foundation；command higher sala...
