这句话是病句吗?怎么改好？

显示全部楼层 · 2011-11-6 15:27:46

不是病句，这是and连接的两个句子，到and停顿一下There are many changes happened in my life when I grew up and even I don’t realize when it happened....

千问 · 2011-11-6 15:27:46

There are many changes happenedin my life
（停顿）when I grew up（停顿）
and even I don’t realize when it happened. 我的生活在我成长时发生了很多变化，甚至我都没意识到是什么时候发生的。按照空格断句，应该会更顺一点。...

千问 · 2011-11-6 15:27:46

There were many changes happening in my life when I was growing up and even I don’t know when it they happened....