谁能帮我找一下这些英语句子的语法错误?谢谢……

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查看11 | 回复3 | 2011-11-7 14:52:04 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
If i could, i wanna be with you. For the future, for you and for myself, i will try my best to go with you. I will study hard for myself and for you. In the near future, I will make you believe. At our age, you can find one person who will stay with you forever. Perhaps, i shouldn'thave promised too much, but i am able to do m...
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千问 | 2011-11-7 14:52:04 | 显示全部楼层
I want to be with you if i can.(wanna 是口语,不能用,这个句子倒过来念比较顺。)I will try my best to go with you(请问是想表达和你一起走得意思么?), for you, for myself, and for the future.(这样讲比较动情)I will study hard a...
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千问 | 2011-11-7 14:52:04 | 显示全部楼层
If I can,I wanna be with you.For the future,for you,for myself,I will try my best to go with you.[br/]I will study hard.for myself for you.[br/]In the near future.I will make you b...
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