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I have a good frieni (who's) whose name is Li mei.She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.( whose)clever as she is ,(but) she works Very hard.We have a( 去掉but)lot (on) common and have a lot to talk about.One evening she(in )told me that something happened when her parents (was) out.(were )She was doin...
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one of the (加上 most) excellent去掉 buthave a lot in common, 不是on commonwas-->werewhile-->whenstopped to look outfind-->found...
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monitor and one of the (most) excellent students in our class.( )clever as she is ,but she works (studies)Very hard.We have a( )Lot on (in)common and have a lot to talk about.One e...
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