Hi！我看了你的日记，内容很好，只是一些语法读起来有些不顺，［原文］，（我帮你改的）。建议你可以多读一些短故事，不要死背英文书里的句子／语法，因为组成英语句子有几千种方法，建议灵活运用，同时也能增加你对英语的兴趣。I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. [The] (My)job is so busy every day. I [need] (have) to sit in front of the computerand reply to my [costomer's] (customer’s) problem [ceaselessly](好...
逐句改了，也许不能与你原意完全吻合I'm Sally.I am working in a software company as a customer service.你现在还在这个公司工作，不应该用过去时态The job is a very busy one,I have to sit in front of compute...
I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. The job is *very* busy every day. I need to sit in front of the computer and reply to my *customers‘ problems inces...
1,busy 是形容人的，不能说the job is so busy, 应该是 I am very busy...2,reply 是及物动词，不需要to ，这里说的不好，不能用reply，3, I feel so frotunate bacause they are in my side. 你要说的意思应该是，他们不在这里，我感觉很沮丧吗？ 如果是，...
首先我想说，初学英语就能达到这种水平不错哦~_~ 我就简单地说说改进意见吧I'm Sally,who worked as a customer counselor(service是服务的意思，不准确)in a software company(定语从句). The job is so busy every day. What I need to do ...
