the motivation that keeps you going，go aboard……有些语法和拼写问题呀。还有，你不是用翻译器写的吧，呃，我觉得吧，有好些地方不太通顺，当然，能看出来你很用心的用那些高级的词。比如： it is unnecessary that because of the loss of old friends we are afraid of going to a new city.我觉得吧，改成：it is unnecessary for us to be afraid of moving to a new city because of the loss of old friends.这样比较通顺吧。我的Wri...
