1."involoves",这里应该是"involves";2." in children",是不是改为among更好点？ 3.“throught ”，应是"thought";4. "be unwilling to ",这里be用的不对，前边缺东西。5.”confront with“,这里用错了，confront是个及物动词，应当直接跟宾语。6.”since people will do their utmost “，这里since用的似乎不对吧？7."draw on others' strengths,thereby bettering themselves.改为：draw on others' strengths tob...
