Dear Mr Smith,I'm very much(去掉much) glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build (加上a)non-smoking supermarket,In myopinion, it is a good idea to do so , for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less,and(改为but) it can also do good to other customers' health.Since you had(改为have) given up selling cigar...
Dear Mr Smith, I'm very much glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build a non-smoking supermarket,In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so , for it can not onl...
Dear Mr Smith,I'm very （去掉much）glad to hear that your intemational shopping center will build（a） non-smoking supermarket,In myopinion, it is a good idea to do so , for it can n...
