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He is Simon. He often plays football to keep fit. He also eats healthy food.For breakfast, he always has an egg. He also eats baozi or mantou, and He drinks a glass of milk. This helps him start the day well.He has rice or noodles for lunch. He has meat and vegetables too. This meal gives him energy for the whole afternoon....
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千问 | 2012-12-23 18:24:01 | 显示全部楼层
He is Simon. He often plays football to keep fit.He also eats healthy food. For breakfast,he always has an egg. He also eats baozi or mantou,and he drinks a glass of milk. This h...
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千问 | 2012-12-23 18:24:01 | 显示全部楼层
太多简单句了,我稍微改了一下。Simon often plays football to keep fit. He has a healthy diet everyday.First of all,for breakfast, he always eats an egg and a glass of milk. Also, he eats bao...
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千问 | 2012-12-23 18:24:01 | 显示全部楼层
He is Simon. He often plays football to keep fit. He also eats healthy food.For breakfast, he always has an egg. He also eats baozi or mantou, and he drinks a glass of milk. This...
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千问 | 2012-12-23 18:24:01 | 显示全部楼层
会 但太长了 I改成Heam→is谓语动原加sus→them...
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