求英语翻译修改。终于有积分了。。。

显示全部楼层 · 2011-12-14 20:15:55

I am eager to render services or help others,I firmly believethat helping others is helping oneself, I volunteered to raise money to help the secondary school’s students in depressed area,I also spent my spare time to go to the school for deaf-mutes to provide proper counselling. I still remember the scene of my first time t...

千问 · 2011-12-14 20:15:55

我渴望呈递服务或是帮助他人，并深信帮助别人即是帮助自己。我义务存钱去帮那些边远地区学校的孩子们，也会利用业余时间去聋哑学校里给予他们适当的咨询服务。我依然记得我第一次去哪里的情景：那是一个浓雾的早晨，我穿着一件白色的裙子，正当我在迟疑能否和他们顺利交流的时候，坐在教室里的一个小女孩好奇的看着我，冲我笑并发出一句话，虽然我不懂他的意思，但从她出传达给我的友好的...

千问 · 2011-12-14 20:15:55

我渴望提供服务或帮助别人,我坚信帮助别人就是帮助自己,我就自愿筹集资金帮助中学的学生在贫困地区,我也花了我的业余时间去学校提供适当的自由提供咨询服务。我仍然记得我第一次现场去学校:这是一个有雾的早晨,我穿了一件白色的衣裳,IWhen我很犹豫,如果我能跟他们沟通成功,一个小女孩在教室里看着我curiousily给我一个甜蜜的微笑,做了一个手势,虽然我不了解她d...

千问 · 2011-12-14 20:15:55

I am eager to render services and help others. I strongly believe that helping others is helping oneself. I volunteered to raise money for helping the secondary students in less de...

千问 · 2011-12-14 20:15:55

I am eager to render services or help others,I firmly believe helping others is helping oneself, I volunteered to raise money to help the secondary school students in disadvantaged...