这句英文错在何处？

显示全部楼层 · 2013-1-6 17:55:59

which错了，如果用which，就变成了是exercise使白领增加体重。而且前面的"do exercise",加"do" ，"exercise"就得是负数，不加"do"可以是原型。修改：前半句不变的话后面改为：..., and that is why they easily put on weight/ and that is how they put on weight....

千问 · 2013-1-6 17:55:59

错在用了 so that。把 that 去掉就好了。最好把which makes many white collars put on weight中的many white collars换成 them 或者 many of them 就更好了。...

千问 · 2013-1-6 17:55:59

语句逻辑错误前面说是白领总是给自己加工作量，是主动语态后面又说这让他们减肥前后矛盾which指代不明...

千问 · 2013-1-6 17:55:59

你用了First of all，那then呢？还有就是为什么给他们工作他们就没有时间做练习？语意不通啊~再然后，你为什么要用which？这不是定语从句啊。。。你which根本没有指代的东西啊...

千问 · 2013-1-6 17:55:59

把最后which makes改成which won't make即可Trust me...