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The Serious Problem of Global WarmingI believe global warming is one of the biggest problems every country in the world is facing. When I say global warming it refers to the rising average temperature of Earth's atmosphere and oceans and its projected continuation.Of course, there are other serious problems like violence, raci...
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千问 | 2012-1-6 21:27:57 | 显示全部楼层
seriousness of global warmingWhat do you think is the biggest problem of these days ,violence, racial or conflict,? I think global warming is the biggest problem of the world. ...
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千问 | 2012-1-6 21:27:57 | 显示全部楼层
不止有语法问题,好多句子不通顺,好多词语要换一下,否则显得死板、生硬...
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