dont start with a sentence with 'so'green campus DOESNT only mean...not need for a comma (,) before 'but'delete the 'i' before 'we'add 'in' after 'live' ( we need such AN environment to live IN so...)firstLYtry putting a comma instead of a full-stop before 'try' (cherish the environment, try not...)secondLY (friendly to ...
