帮忙改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢了!我怕我的作文又要重写啊!不要留情~请指出我的错误。

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Yesterdaywas, the first day of new term, and(and去掉) the weather was fine in the morning. Studentswere in the classroom early. They waited for a long time but the teacher didnot show (加上up). So they started to do something that they like. For example, Lily andTony cleaned the windows, two girls talked about their favorite sin...
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