你改的句子也成立,但不是你想要的那个“最初的写法”,最初的是这样的:That you swim or dive as your body floats on the surface is difficult.(确实头重脚轻,很难受吧?所以用了形式主语it)当然这句如果只要求另一种说法,也可以改成:It is difficult for you to swim or dive as your body floats on the surface....
最初的写法是:That you swim or dive is difficult as your body floats on the surface.为了避免主语太长,谓语太短,我们用形式主语it的结构,写成:It is difficult that you swim or dive as your body floats on the su...