I never shake my determination建议可以换一种方式表达it never break my resolve.and hoped to stand 建议换一种方式表达in the hope of standing/in hope that I could stand .因为我坚信，要做就要做到最好，I was firmly convinced that I could do my best.my parents suggested that I cut back my training or simply give up---my parents suggested cutting back my training ...
