首先,是你喜欢的女生有了心上人,是吗?朋友,你要抓紧了,一首诗不管用,高深人家弄不懂,浅薄显得你没文采,还不如换个方式,或者几个方式组合,哪能吊死在一棵树上?你说对吧!如果你硬要改的话,我只能向你推荐一首诗: 世界上最遥远的距离The most distant way in the world 不是生与死的距离 is not the way from birth to the end. 而是我就站在你面前It is when I sit near you 你却不知道我爱你 that you don't understand I love you. 世界上最遥远的距离 The most distant way in...