I have (a) goodfriend whose name is Tom .She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in ourclass .Although she is clever ,but（去掉这里的but 或者前面的although） she works very hard（ly去掉） .We have a lot in common and have a lot to talk about(去掉about） .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents （were） out ....
1、have和good之间加a 2、第2行去掉but （although和but不能连用）3、hardly改为hard 4、第4行homeworks改为homework 5、第四行one改为on 6、第四行后面的stopped和look之间加to （stop to do something停下来去做某事）7、倒数第2行late改为la...
I have a good friend whose name is Tom .She is our monitor and one of the most excellent students in ourclass .Although she is clever , she works very hard .We have a lot in comm...
I have a good friend whose name is Tom .She is our monitor and one of the most excellent students in ourclass .Although she is clever , she works very hard .We have a lot in comm...
